Teh Wozzinator

my edits are (as always) in bold CHAPTER 1 Miss Liana had, unfortunately, woken up to[b]o early before her time to do so. This last sentence is really weird. I ...

it wasn't bad, but it needs a lot of work. i can't really say anything else that Suzanne hasn't said, so i'll leave it at that. but i will press ...

i must ask...what contest? my edits will be in bold As stated, this is for Author13's contest. I'm not sure how the last few paragraphs are, so.................. yes. Have fun! ...

Wow Matt, your stuff is great every time. (Well, ok, i've just read Snoink, other than this, but STILL!! lol) anyways, I must say...great. i really liked the rhythm, it ...

nothing to edit, but one comment: your rhythm is amazing! unlike many on the site, it's great.... the first two lines were my favorite. it was slightly dull, i guess, ...

wow, i've really started to like poetry, and there's lots of good stuff on the site. (and a bit of bad stuff). this is definitely among the good. it was ...

i loved it!! the title is what got me here.... but, as those before me, i'm confused at what's happening. how i interpreted it was just a kid on the ...

here's a quick question...should this be rated G or PG? i guess G works, seeing as some other people have put worst stuff as G...I guess i just rated it ...

my edits are in bold my heart aches, as i gaze up into your beautiful eyes. this line was good... my heart skips a beat my face, flushed of all ...

i agree with those before me who said your characters need more work. also, i wasn't aware whether kearin was a boy or a girl. also, they gave them a ...

I guess I didn't really get it...I agree with Suzanne. And your rhythm needs work too.... It's rough and some of the lines are too short (all the single-word lines). ...

is was good, but some of it was a little time for a long edit here, but i liked it. really good, Sumi Teh Wozzinator (btw, eventually i'll hopefully get ...

omigosh!! i can't believe this came out without me knowing it!! lol. my edits in bold, as usual :arrow: Author's Note Hi, This might not turn out to be your ...

my edits will be in bold He could almost taste the mouse, it was so close. Raul drew in, step by step. This time he must not miss. The mouse ...

Wow, I thought that this was really good and imaginative. I don't have anything to say that Sam hasn't said, but I really liked it. Thanks for a great read. ...